• Intro (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis:
    My mom is the utmost marvelous person ever, considering she is very loyal when it comes to her family, she works hard to contribute for her family’s needs, and she sends us off each day with a positive attitude.

  • My mom is very supporting in our

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts

  • My father is the most responsible person in the world since he provides all the necessities for the family, lends a shoulder to his relatives, and makes sure that all his kids do well in school.

  • My father works hard to make sure that all of our family’s needs are taken care of.

    • works a full time job
    • fixes things around the house
  • All of my relatives come to my father whenever they have a problem because he is a caring person.

    • lent my uncle money for rent
    • sent food to hospital when cousin was there
    • always concerned about people’s health
  • Ever since my siblings and I were little, my father has always made sure that we did well in school.

    • helps us with homework
    • meets regularly with our teachers
    • goes to our sports events
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