• introduction(6-8 sentences)
    conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • body paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • lead-in

  • build up to thesis statement

  • thesis statement (main idea of the essay + the three points you;re going to focus on)

  • topic sentence (main idea of the paragraph)

  • supporting details (examples of your topic sentence)

  • concluding sentence (ties whole paragraph together)

  • topic sentence

  • supporting details

  • concluding sentence

  • topic sentence

  • supporting detail

  • concluding sentence

  • paraphrase thesis statement

  • paraphrases your three topic sentences

  • end with final thoughts (what do you want your reader to do/remember?)

  • i am very fortunate because my father gave, and also introduced me to my first bike ever back in 06, in 07 got it taken away for accidently running over my sister.

  • everyday i would practice riding my bike at the field.

    • i can ride my bike.
    • i can pop a wheelie while riding
  • I like to create andventures from nothing, when i was younger i would jump off things out of no where

    • i am an adventure starter
    • i do dangerous things that are trilling
  • i tend to loose focus when i ride the adrenaline rushing through my veins makes me just gas it.

  • i loose focus when i ride
    when my adrenaline hits i feel unstopable

  • i practice riding my dirtbike, unfortunatly in 07 i accidentally ran my sister over. when i ride i tend to go crazy due to the adrenaline rush. i guess it started when i was young, and would jump off things.

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