• Intro

  • Body Paragraph 1

  • Body Paragraph 2

  • Body Paragraph 3

  • Conclusion

  • Lead-in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic Sentence

  • Supporting Details

  • Concluding Sentence

  • Topic Sentence

  • Supporting Details

  • Concluding Sentence

  • Topic Sentence

  • Supporting Details

  • Concluding Sentence

  • Paraphrase Thesis

  • Paraphrase Topic Sentence

  • Final Thoughts

  • Everyone has different ways of living life but mine is sort of normal compared to others.

  • My life has been about experiencing risks, helping out others, and trying complicated tasks in life.

  • Experiencing risks are scary but I sometimes we have to go with it because it helps us achieve in life.

    • Car Crashes
    • Injuries
    • First Days of School
  • It has always came up to me to help out either friends, family, or people searching for help out there in the world.

    • I’m a concern person
    • Giving out advice
    • Sometimes lending money to friends and family members
  • I’m that person that is willing to try some complicated tasks and see if I can achieve them.

    • First time cooking
    • First time driving
    • Shooting my first gun
  • All though my life has been about either experiencing risks, helping out others, and trying complicated tasks in life it has helped me out to be a better person.

  • Parts in my life haven’t been so easy I’ve had to pull myself through the dirt to achieve them. Risks I’ve taken have been hard and there were some I couldn’t achieve and failed but I won’t stop there. Friends and family members know the struggle I’ve gone through so I’m happy I have them. The tasks I have achieved I’m proud of because I know I tried my best and reached the goal I was going for.

  • Everyone can become what they want in life. I choose the life I have, live the way I do, be the way I am because that’s how I was supposed to be.

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