• Intro (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts

  • Do you think that coming from humble grounds, makes you a better person?

  • I would consider myself selfless,caring, and motivated person.

  • I’m a selfless person, because I always put others need before my own.

    • donating money to those in need
    • always putting my son and family first
  • Overall, I’m glad I can give back to those in need, and also be a great mother and role model to my family.

  • Caring is something that comes naturally to me.

    • Being a mother
    • Showing Compassion
    • Animal Lover
  • Ultimately, caring is big to me! I love knowing that I can show compassion for others than myself and make them feel better.

  • Motivation is key to many things you want to accomplish in life.

    • Finishing School
    • Going to Work
  • Finally, being self-motivated will pay dividends to my overall success.

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