• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement ( main idea of the essay + the three points you’re going to focus on )

  • Topic sentence (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (example of your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentences (ties whole paragraph together)

  • Topic

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentences

  • Topic

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentences

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase your three topic sentences

  • End with final thoughts ( what do you want your reader to do/remember?)

  • You have to live life to the fullest and have no regrets.

    • I am very grateful . I am a very loud person, i dont like to be bossed around i hate that. I like stuff dealing with going out, make-up, and nails, etc. everything that has to do with girly stuff.

    • I like going out because i have a time off of school, homework, and parents.

    • -ranches with family
      -dinners with friends and family
      -parties/hangouts

    • I like spending time with family and friends because I am the type of person that likes to have fun.

    • What can I say about make-up?Make-up is my passion i just love experimenting new ideas.

    • -eyeshadow
      -lipstick
      -mascara/eyeliner

    • Every time I do make-up is like I am in heaven. Hopefully during this summer I am able to take the make-up course in UCAS.

    • Nails is one of the things i love to do also. I like making new colors and designs.

    • -designs
      -new color acrylics/nailpolish

      • 3D designs
    • I love making new desings and all that stuff. That is just part if my hobby that i like to do.

    • I love my three hobby because it keeps me really busy during my days of school and homework. I enjoy what i do because it is what my parents involved me into.

    • I like going out because i have a time off of school, homework, and parents. In my time off I enjoy my day in whatever I’m doing if its either spending time with my family etc. What can I say about make-up?Make-up is my passion i just love experimenting new ideas.When I do make-up I get into my little world and start doing what i do best my eyeshadow and the lipstick.Nails is one of the things i love to do also. I like making new colors and designs. I like experimenting with long nails. I personally like having long nails because it gets people attention a lot especially when i wear dramatic colors.

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