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Conclusion
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Introduction
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Who I am
I am a person who always worked hard to get my goals. I never give up to the hardest moments. I feel frustrating when I can’t do something right.
I prefer to keep going and don’t have any distraction, I avoid wasting time.
I am sacrificing sending my daughter all day in the daycare.
I work hard full time and study.
I always think positive when I have a lot of problems.
I think in my future, that way I can keep going straight to my goals.
I become more strong than ever.
*Always stay focus in what I want and what I need.
I always want things to be perfect.
I try to do every things carefully.
I think step by step before I do something.
-I worked full-time.
My family loves me, they know I do anything for see them happy. I feel in peace knowing that all my hard worked, had a reward.