• Intro

  • Body paragraph 1

  • topic sentences

  • Body paragraph 2

  • Body paragraph3

  • Conclusion

  • Lead in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Introduction

  • thesis statment

  • topic sentences 1

  • Topic sentences 2

  • Topic sentences 3

  • supporting details

  • concluding topic sentences

  • paraphrase topic sentences

      • Who I am

      • I am a person who always worked hard to get my goals. I never give up to the hardest moments. I feel frustrating when I can’t do something right.

      • I prefer to keep going and don’t have any distraction, I avoid wasting time.
        I am sacrificing sending my daughter all day in the daycare. I work hard full time and study.

      • I always think positive when I have a lot of problems.
        I think in my future, that way I can keep going straight to my goals. I become more strong than ever.
        *Always stay focus in what I want and what I need.

      • I always want things to be perfect.
        I try to do every things carefully. I think step by step before I do something.

        • I organized my time.
      • -I worked full-time.

        • I make cupcakes for sale.
          -I smiled even when im not happy.
      • My family loves me, they know I do anything for see them happy. I feel in peace knowing that all my hard worked, had a reward.

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