• Introduction(6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Buildup to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+ the three points you’re going to focus on)

  • Topic sentence (main idea of the paragraph

  • Supporting details (examples of your topic sentene)

  • Concluding sentence (ties whole paragraph together)

  • Topic sentences

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentences

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase your three topics sentences

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • End with final thoughts (what do you want your reader to do /remember?)

  • Always live a positive and happy life.

    • I’m Alondra Gonzalez. I’m the kind of person that always likes to go fishing. I love the outdoors. I’m a very quiet person. I don’t really like talking to people I never know what to talk about.

    • I like fishing because it helps me relax from all the school work I have.

      • fishing
      • peaceful
    • It’s a very entertaining and peaceful hobby once I’m out their in the woods.

    • All my relatives love going fishing and spending time together.

      • spending time together
      • love fishing
    • We love being in the outdoors and barbequing every weekend. We’re big eaters also.

      • outdoors
      • barbecues
      • Outdoors
    • I love what I do. Fishing will always be my hobby. It’s something I will enjoy for the rest of my life specially on my free time.

    • Fishing is something I will enjoy no matter what I do. I will always be a quiet person because that’s the way I was raised. I’m very shy when it comes talking to other people. That’s just me.

    • I’m a big fisher girl. On my spear time I will always be found on the side of a lake or canal fishing with my family.

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