Who am i jessica ramirez

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I am a college student at South Texas College, majoring in Criminal Justice.\n\n *I am motivated\n*I have a strong character\n*I am helpful to others"},{"_id":"48b7d7c255d33c7a7000001c","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":628712,"position":1,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aac","content":"In Order to make it in Criminal Justice you have to be a motivated person because working for any law enfacement chain you will face many hard times. "},{"_id":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aae","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":624739,"position":2,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aab","content":"Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)"},{"_id":"48b7e0d055d33c7a7000001d","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":628717,"position":1,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aae","content":"In Criminal Justice you face many hard times, so you have to push yourself to make it through the day. In college my professor really pushes us to take it seriously. Because working for the law can be very hard. My professor gives us alot of homework because she says its to prepare us for the future paperwork we may have. She is also very Strict because in the future we may work for someone who doesn't have a sese of humor. "},{"_id":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aaf","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":628709,"position":3,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aab","content":"Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)"},{"_id":"48b7e9de55d33c7a7000001f","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":628710,"position":1,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aaf","content":"Criminal Justice takes alot of work and self motivation. "},{"_id":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab0","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":624741,"position":3,"parentId":null,"content":"Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab1","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":628706,"position":1,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab0","content":"Topic sentence 2"},{"_id":"48b7e79d55d33c7a7000001e","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":628722,"position":1,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab1","content":"Having a strong character really helps everyone not just criminal justice. I believe having a strong character will help you succed in life and not get played by it."},{"_id":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab2","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":624743,"position":2,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab0","content":"Supporting details"},{"_id":"48b803f855d33c7a70000020","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":628729,"position":1,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab2","content":"My professor showed us a video of how some F.B.I. agents got attached to a certain situation and how now it is easy for them to get attached to every call they get in. She said that having a strong character will make it difficult for people to read us. It will also show that you are a strong person and a confident in what you are doing. Having a strong character does not mean you have to be cold hearted it just makes you someone who is willing to show the world what they have without showing it at all."},{"_id":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab3","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":624744,"position":3,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab0","content":"Concluding sentence"},{"_id":"48b8179855d33c7a70000021","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":628744,"position":1,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab3","content":"I believe strong charactered people are more likely to succeed if they know how to use it. I believe i am a strong charactered person because I really don't get attached to things and ive gone through many life lessons that have showed me to be a strong person who will give it her best to succeed"},{"_id":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab4","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":624745,"position":4,"parentId":null,"content":"Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab5","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":624746,"position":1,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab4","content":"Topic sentence 3"},{"_id":"48b825a655d33c7a70000022","treeId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43aa4","seq":628751,"position":1,"parentId":"5411c1f7f99783a551a43ab5","content":"Being helpful can get you many places. 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