• Intro

  • Body Paragraph 1

  • Body Paragraph 2

  • Body Paragraph 3

  • Conclusion

  • Lead-in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

  • Paraphrase topic sentence

  • Final thoughts

  • I am a person that if I want something i obtain it , Im a really outgoing person and social, I am a very active person .

  • My hobbies are cooking and workout.

  • *I like to cook because that relaxes me and because i like getting complements from people when they try my food.

    *I like to workout because i like living a healthy life.

  • You can tell based on my hobbies that i love moving around and at the same relaxing.

  • I had good and bad experiences .

  • *The bad thing or experience is that I can’t see my family, and its so hard and difficult being apart from love ones.

    *Not only do I have bad experiences but also I’ve had good outcomes like learning English and getting a better education, and getting prepared for my future.

  • In conclusion to my experiences no matter how bad nor good things has happen to me, I know that in the future the outcome or the result is going to be a good one because I’m going to try my best to keep on going and to achieve my goals.

  • My goal is to be a professional teacher.

  • *To become a teacher I’m going to try my best in learning every step of the way, so I can reach my goal and be successful.

    *I want to be a teacher because, I would like to help kids learn and get them ready for what school is and also i love being around kids.

  • To become this dream true, I haven’t one this alone I’ve had a lot of support from my loving family, and friends. Also I’ve tried my best in staying together and not letting my feelings interfere with achieving my goal.

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