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I am a person that if I want something i obtain it , Im a really outgoing person and social, I am a very active person .
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My hobbies are cooking and workout.
*I like to cook because that relaxes me and because i like getting complements from people when they try my food.
*I like to workout because i like living a healthy life.
You can tell based on my hobbies that i love moving around and at the same relaxing.
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I had good and bad experiences .
*The bad thing or experience is that I can’t see my family, and its so hard and difficult being apart from love ones.
*Not only do I have bad experiences but also I’ve had good outcomes like learning English and getting a better education, and getting prepared for my future.
In conclusion to my experiences no matter how bad nor good things has happen to me, I know that in the future the outcome or the result is going to be a good one because I’m going to try my best to keep on going and to achieve my goals.
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My goal is to be a professional teacher.
*To become a teacher I’m going to try my best in learning every step of the way, so I can reach my goal and be successful.
*I want to be a teacher because, I would like to help kids learn and get them ready for what school is and also i love being around kids.
To become this dream true, I haven’t one this alone I’ve had a lot of support from my loving family, and friends. Also I’ve tried my best in staying together and not letting my feelings interfere with achieving my goal.
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